After a critique with the tutors, here was my new plan of action..
~Change title cover as it style was in it's own world. It didn't connect up with the other design aspects of my brochure. So that had to go.
~Change spread compositions, there was no visual flow as the centre images just stuck into the fold and looked 'odd'.
~ MORE WELLINGTON! I think this is too many people's problems, it's difficult to stick to.
~Play with grid and type positioning.
~Experiment with composition.
Here we go.. Mock up take 2!
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