Here is my updated and re-thought composition idea for my 3 spreads.
Introduction
Crumpet
End spread
Six Barrel Soda
The new composition consists of one main image of specialty milkshake/soda in the middle of a 'rule of thirds' grid. There are now 3 main columns (text, centre image, images/secondary information).
I think this composition sits a lot more comfortably with the eye, as the last composition cut off the main image with an incomplete shape.
I also added some hand-drawn elements (titles of each spread, framing of main images) to give a more 'homely' feel. This comes from the milkshakes' natural messiness, and inability to create a milkshake perfectly clean.
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